Writing challenge

 One day me,chaun,Gabriel,Sheldon,Aaron went on a trip to an abandoned island.The island was so nice and blue that it looked like heaven.But there were booby traps like if you tripped on a wire it triggered a log to swing out of nowhere and try knock the lights out of you.You can also fall into a hole that was only covered by the top.Me chaun kept on seeing our friends being clumsy and tripping on stuff.We heard that there was a treasure chest hidden somewhere.we were to scared to go any further because we don't want to see funerals.and it was to dangerous So we went back home and all went to watch a movie.