Once upon a time we travelled far far away and then we saw a spooky house up the hill. Me and William went inside there was a ghost we ran out of the spooky house because there was a vampire too We went in there again we saw a room we went inside. We got locked in there with all the other vampires we hide some were the vampires could not see us because we got a chair we used it to smash the glass . We jumped down I ran home for safe I didn't know which way to go.
Hi Kristopher
ReplyDeleteThis is a really exciting story about a spooky house. You have a very good imagination and I loved reading your story. I can't wait to read more stories from you. Well done!
Love from Mum xx
It was lucky you and William didn't get cuts from the smashed glass. Good thinking though, you managed to get out and home to safety.
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Hi Kristopherl I love the way you have written about a spooky house. It sounds like you are writing about Halloween. It has lots of detail and is a year 3 story. Wish to see more. Keep up the great work. By Zack and Pheazon.
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