Wednesday 15 May 2019
old cottage
Once upon a time there was a dark creepy cottage in the middle of nowhere there was dirty grass growing on top there were shattered glass in the cottage it looked like it was abandoned when i walked in the house i hated the wind whistling through my face because I thought something was gonna jumpscare me so i ran out and never went there again.
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Hey Kristopher!
ReplyDeleteI really like your peave of writing. it very interesting and detailed. I enjoyed reading every word. I like the how you desribed what you saw heard and felt.
One thing I would change is the length. I really liked the story and am hoping you will do a part 2!
Anyways Keep up the good writing!
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