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Monday 11 February 2019

finding the mistakes

FIX THE MISTAKES!


WALT: use full stops and capital letters correctly in our writing.


The writing below has some missing full stops and capital letters! Can
you find the mistakes?


In December last year I went on a trip to Western Australia. It was the
first time I had been there since I was two years old. While I was there
I had many adventures and saw a lot of wildlife. I saw Lizards and a
range of Birds and Frogs and kangaroo and snakes and fish and quokka
and stingray.


One of the highlights of my trip was when I climbed 61 metres up a tree
to a fire lookout there was an amazing view from the top i could see right
over the treetops and into the distance. Treetop lookouts like this one were
once used to keep an eye out for bushfires.


It was 44 degrees celsius on the day I left Perth and there was a
big bushfire which had started a couple of hours down the road as a result.
There were thunderstorms rumbling around the city. In the plane we flew
near a thunderstorm which was absolutely amazing.

After sitting on the plane for six and a half hours the plane landed in
Auckland. We were told it was 21 degrees this was 23 degrees colder
than in Perth I was cold.

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