Egyptian writing task

Discovery of 

Ancient Egypt

Instructions:

Use the video to plan below, to write a story about Cairo, 1920, an archaeologist is about to discover the secret of the Egyptian Pyramids ...

Planning of your narrative writing:

Introduction: (Orientation: who, when, where)	A man and a camel  at the desert  idk
Characters: What is going to happen to them?	A man finds an egyptain remote
Problem: What problem is going to happen in your story?	A man finds the remote then a face comes out of the ground and stairs then the man went and then the camel swallowed the remote then the man  was trapped
Solution: How will it resolve?	The man  will have to go through the pyramid to get out

Include these words below in your writing:

Describe Settings:	Describe Characters	Describe Feelings	Describe Ancient Egypt	Line Starters
Breathe taking Glorious Magnificient Spectacular Majestic Impressive Creepy Eerie Spine-chilling Unnerving  Unappealing	Amiable Charming Delightful Courageous Fearless Valiant Obnoxious Unpleasant Repulsive Enormous humongous	Delighted Ecstatic Euphoric Anxious Uneasy Apprehensive Despondent Petrified Panic-stricken Scared witless convinced	Pyramids Sphinx Egyptian Pharaoh Mummy Canopic Jars Coffin Hieroglyphics Desert Tomb	Suddenly .. Never in my life ... Barely alive… I In the blink of an eye …  Immediately … Almost unbelievably …

Start Writing below:

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One day a man went to cairo a place in egypt.He went digging next to a pyramid.
Then he found this mysterious item it was purple and it looked like it had Egyptian symbols.
There was a face button.He clicked it.His camel felt uncomfortable.We felt the ground shake.
The pyramid went up and this egyptian face showed.He clicked another button and stairs came down
to the ground from the mouth of the face.

The man went walking up the stairs into the mouth as soon as the man went into the mouth the camel
was chewing on the remote.The door shut behind him.It was pitch black but of course he would have
a flash light.There were lights coming from the distance.So he walked towards the light.

When the man got to the light there was a large python snake thing that was guarding the way.
The snake was so ancient that it could say 5 words only and it was what is the magic word.I knew
it was a egyptian word.I saw this writing on the wall and it said let me pass.So i said this word
in egypt language.It worked so the snake let me pass.

As I was waking through this alleyway thing I kept on seeing ancient writing on the wall.as
I was looking at the floor I saw that the floor looked weird ahead of me it looked like sand.I put my foot
in and it sunk slow it was like  barely sinking me but  it was strong so I couldn't get out.It was quicksand
I looked in my bag to see if there was any way to get across to the other side.There was this foldable
plank that was in my bag I could use it to get across so I unfolded the plank and chucked on top of the
quick sand and I walk across.

There was one last stag.I knew because it said it on the wall.This room looked suspicious It was empty.
I heard this beetle thing then thousands came out of the wall I had to break the ground under me to get
out because there was a stone door to get me out.So I looked inside my bag again to find something
and i found dynamite I exploded it but I survived and the beetle died and I got what i needed to get me
out I picked t up and headed out.

The door was there I could get out I saw my camel.It was a big drop I couldn't get down.But once
and for all I looked in my bag to help me But actually I didn't need anything inside my bag.All I needed
was my actual bag Because it was a parachute.I put my bag a.k.a parachute back on my back and
jump off bravely And let the parachute out and landed safely.then I went home happily ever after.