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Friday, 22 May 2020

rainbow's end writing

Rainbows End

Length
Bronze medal 2 paragraphs
Silver medal = 3 paragraphs
Gold medal = 5 paragraphs
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Instructions

Did you know, Miss West has NEVER been on a roller coaster!? Write a story about the first time Miss West visited Rainbows End and went on a roller coaster.

OR 

Write a recount about a time you have been to Rainbows End.

Ideas to use
Times: Before the roller coaster ride. During the roller coaster ride. After the roller coaster ride.
Feelings: Scared/ nervous, excited/ happy
Roller coaster vocabulary: train, car, lapbar or harness, track, circuit
People: Instructor/guide, Friends/ Family, Miss West



Try to use some or all of these words in your writing:
nervous
thumping heart
wobbled

screamed
exhilarating
gulped

wind in my face
whistled
chatter

shuddered
flying
windswept



Start Writing below



One sunny morning, Miss West decided it was time to face her fears and go on a roller coaster for the very first time. She packed a bag for the day, got in her car and headed off to Rainbows End...she looked at one of the roller coasters her heart started pounding my brain is telling me to back out so I did until somebody said are you coming I saw that some children from school were there so she said i couldn't back out now.So I went the first thing the children wanted me to go on was the fearfall.

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